All Comments on 'To Tame a Housewife'

Well written if very nasty story. Some will love it, many will hate but then what does one expect in this category?

To punish and hit. With prenup only send her away! But to violate someone so little and he sooooo big is only cowardly! And this is exactly what he is ,only a coward hit women!

I appreciate the feedback from both of you! I will admit I was a little surprised the reaction I've gotten to this so far, I actually thought it was a pretty tame story compared to some of the other stuff I've read in this genre lol. The slapping and hair pulling wasn't meant to be any worse than one would see on rough sex porn, and in fact "cheating wife gets punished" is a pretty popular porn trope from what I've seen. I get it though, domestic violence is a real problem and for a lot of people something like this just hits too close to home. Four criminals breaking into someone's house and gang raping them (something I read about on here), doesn't really happen all that often IRL. Husbands beat their wives everyday, so I can see how for a lot of people this type of story is more unsettling than the burglar(s) story. It was purely intended as sexual fantasy; a woman being tossed around, ravaged, forced to cum repeatedly, then made into a whore, etc. That is a sexual fantasy MANY women can get into, in fact, on other places I've posted this story it's primarily been the ladies who have the highest compliments for it.

As an erotica author though, the burden is on me to effectively communicate the mood I want, and it's clear from the ratings and feedback I didn't do that for a lot of people. I will definitely keep all this in mind for future work, this has taught me a lot. Thanks for taking the time to read my story and commenting! =)

Great storyline minus the abuse. Maybe some more spanking and humiliation less beating on her. Waiting for the sequel

I wouldn't worry about those couple of reviews. That's what this category is about. What, it's okay to rape a woman but not to spank her? Jesus people get a grip. They're just stories. And this one a fairly good one!

Very nice one. Author has the guts and balls with the husband character unlike some many other authors here with their sissy characters. I am liberal with the option of having relationship with many others when there is consent form husband or wife. But cheating, unloyality, scheming to enjoy benefit of current marriage though having other partners, it does resulting in violence some times so you should be prepared to face it. I appreciate the showing of violence as if many readers who may have ache in their vagina or on their penis to go on the path of betrayal then also may have in their minds about what kind of outcome they may get in return. If you not happy end the relationship and try multiple partners for your ache or do experiment with the consent of your husband or wife but don't choose the path of betrayal.

I’d agree that the comments are off for this category and that’s you are using the cheating wife gets punished trope correctly. Seems like the issue taken was presence of punishment and lack of sex? which does make sense, but the oral, forced orgasms, and promise of rape/prostitution are sex enough in my opinion, even if the husband doesn’t appear to orgasm himself. I think since the content is both bdsm and non consent, readers in each category would take issue, unless they (like myself) are specifically into both.