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"Figure I can whore you out for a few weeks then we go down to the courthouse and sign the divorce papers. Sucks for you that you must have forgot the prenup. When this is over you don't get a single cent!" he bragged, soaking in every ounce of his victory. "Hope you adjust to being a prostitute pretty quick, 'cause that's looking to be your only option after this!" Brett laughed, picking up his bound wife and draping her over his broad shoulder like a potato sack. A single tear streamed down Cheryl's cheek, though her face made no expression as Brett carried her off to get her ready for the evening.
The End
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoI’d agree that the comments are off for this category and that’s you are using the cheating wife gets punished trope correctly. Seems like the issue taken was presence of punishment and lack of sex? which does make sense, but the oral, forced orgasms, and promise of rape/prostitution are sex enough in my opinion, even if the husband doesn’t appear to orgasm himself. I think since the content is both bdsm and non consent, readers in each category would take issue, unless they (like myself) are specifically into both.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoVery nice one. Author has the guts and balls with the husband character unlike some many other authors here with their sissy characters. I am liberal with the option of having relationship with many others when there is consent form husband or wife. But cheating, unloyality, scheming to enjoy benefit of current marriage though having other partners, it does resulting in violence some times so you should be prepared to face it. I appreciate the showing of violence as if many readers who may have ache in their vagina or on their penis to go on the path of betrayal then also may have in their minds about what kind of outcome they may get in return. If you not happy end the relationship and try multiple partners for your ache or do experiment with the consent of your husband or wife but don't choose the path of betrayal.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI wouldn't worry about those couple of reviews. That's what this category is about. What, it's okay to rape a woman but not to spank her? Jesus people get a grip. They're just stories. And this one a fairly good one!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoGreat storyline minus the abuse. Maybe some more spanking and humiliation less beating on her. Waiting for the sequel
RemingtonBradleyalmost 5 years agoAuthorI appreciate the feedback from both of you! I will admit I was a little surprised the reaction I've gotten to this so far, I actually thought it was a pretty tame story compared to some of the other stuff I've read in this genre lol. The slapping and hair pulling wasn't meant to be any worse than one would see on rough sex porn, and in fact "cheating wife gets punished" is a pretty popular porn trope from what I've seen. I get it though, domestic violence is a real problem and for a lot of people something like this just hits too close to home. Four criminals breaking into someone's house and gang raping them (something I read about on here), doesn't really happen all that often IRL. Husbands beat their wives everyday, so I can see how for a lot of people this type of story is more unsettling than the burglar(s) story. It was purely intended as sexual fantasy; a woman being tossed around, ravaged, forced to cum repeatedly, then made into a whore, etc. That is a sexual fantasy MANY women can get into, in fact, on other places I've posted this story it's primarily been the ladies who have the highest compliments for it.
As an erotica author though, the burden is on me to effectively communicate the mood I want, and it's clear from the ratings and feedback I didn't do that for a lot of people. I will definitely keep all this in mind for future work, this has taught me a lot. Thanks for taking the time to read my story and commenting! =)
