All Comments on 'To Tame a Slave Ch. 03'

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bearsladybearsladyabout 9 years ago

Another well done chapter. I'm intrigued by these characters.

Hope you're doing better.

MechanicaMechanicaabout 9 years ago

I'm craving for more description of Drell and Alanna!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good story

It's a nice start. I'm not sure if it would do better in non con though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I thought this was a three part story...?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Anastasia

Oh common why you had to make her a nonhuman couldn't y let her be a normal huma girl why she has to be some nonhuman magical creature :( and I liked this story so much

Prince_of_ThievesPrince_of_Thievesover 8 years ago
Very compelling stroy

subtle plot twist, and still rich in detail. Bring on part 4 !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
ugh

Oh man, I hate inferior men - human traffickers and the like. Can you have her break his heart and have him commit suicide? The only other thing that would make me happy is a threesome when they meet up with this 'friend' of his. Then she can burn them both.

Very intriguing story indeed. Chirpy and fast-paced. Enjoying it.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

MastersWenchMastersWenchalmost 8 years ago

Another good chapter. Can't wait to find out more about this Changeling business!

Loving it...

xx

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