All Comments on 'To Tame a Slave Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I think she should stay with drell and hope you have something cooked up that makes them come together again..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story.

I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
:D

I really love this story, I only wished the chapters would be a bit longer. Please keep on writing!:D

Loves Hester

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 9 years ago
She is taking to slavery way too easily.

Wish she could have stayed with Drell.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I'm Hooked

Looking forward to more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Next Chapter?

Your a good write keep at it. Next chapter please ☺️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please. Please. Please.

Could we please have another chapter. Love the feisty Alanna. Looking forward to more of your story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
WTF!!!

Another writer abandoning their story. I really don't care anymore what the excuse is. I'm done reading any more multi chapter stories before reading comments of the last chapter posted to confirm it has an ending. Yes it will be a huge spoiler but I'm sick of investing any more of my time and emotions on characters left to just float into oblivion. If the author thinks so little of his fans than it's just as well. So sad and disappointed for the last time. :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Stop complaining

You're reading porn on a free website. Stop complaining about free unfinished stories and stick to books that you have to purchase.

Prince_of_ThievesPrince_of_Thievesover 8 years ago
Very reminiscent of the Claiming of Sleeping Beauty trilogy, by Anne Rice

can't help but wonder what's in store in the next part

ScotchnSodaScotchnSodaover 8 years ago
A great story

I have enjoyed all chapters to this point and am looking forward to #5. Nice balance between the characters so far. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Loving it so far!!

MastersWenchMastersWenchalmost 8 years ago
Addicted

This is quickly becoming one of those stories I am addicted to, and want to keep going for a long time. Great job!

xx

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