All Comments on 'To Tell the Truth'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Food for thought (no pun intended)

Proof positive that the brain is the biggest erogenous zone. Your story was very surprising, to be honest I was just as surprised that I read it too, a2m is very very definitely not my thing. There are several levels of yuk involved but I was drawn into reading on by her internal monologue and his comments.

Overall it was very erotic, and visceral. As a piece of writing I thought it was very well planned and executed. Our brains are treacherous devious little fuckers and it’s crossed my mind more than once that maybe I was a cat in a previous life. I know it seems like a bit of a non sequitur but my brain is quite often a complete fucking jerk so the cat thing doesn’t seem like such a leap in that context.

Tess (uk)

ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago
The Thing

The thing is, she is not a "good girl". If she were a good girl, she wouldn't need punishment. She'd be good.

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