All Comments on 'Toes in the Water'

by passionate1also

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IMcRoutIMcRoutalmost 14 years ago
Beautiful and sexy story

It could do with a bit of editing, though, especially the second page.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
we loved it - our dream almost to a stop

We have dreamed and discussed this heaps of times all we need is the setting and the stunning lady

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