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All Comments on 'Tom and Rachel Ch. 01'

by OldManSoftHeart

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Submisky35Submisky35over 3 years ago

I LIKED IT

Well told little story. From the preface to the "climax" the chronology was well done, and the ending made me want to read chapter 2. Keep up the good writing, OldMan,

OldManSoftHeartOldManSoftHeartover 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Submisky35 (and others who emailed me via the Feedback page). I appreciate the comments and suggestions. I have begun reading your series, Millville, and appreciate the story line of discovery. Thank you.

barefoot_planetbarefoot_planetover 2 years ago

Reminds me of a Rachel I knew years ago. We met online too and exchanged ideas about her being tied up and submissive. Who knows? Maybe it’s a small world after all!

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