by dnick47
It's fiction. The line between fiction and fantasy is a very narrow one. However, thank you for your comment.
Terrie, Terri, or ???
This was pretty good. I have to say - this is an erotica site - and we DO want the play-by-play. :)
Which is it? Is she in love with Charlie or just want more cock?
If she loves Charlie, how can she say she loves her husband and don’t give me the bullshit about polyamory. It’s not a thing, just an excuse people tell themselves to justify their bad deeds.
Yes, it's fiction, but especially when the story is already stretching the bounds of reality, you want to make it at least SEEM realistic.
I think you're in need of an editor to correct minor mistakes, but otherwise, not too bad.
Just another fetish-cuck tale to add to the uncountable thousands already here. And so, the inevitable very low readers rating.