All Comments on 'Tommy Pt. 01'

Can't wait for part 2 great story so far !!!!

Good start.

super hot!

Love to read more❤️♥️

So far, so good.

A little drawn out but a good start, so let's see Part 2 soon.

A nice description of just how big Mom's tits are or bra size would help get a mental picture of when she bent over her son and what he saw.

Merci pour cette histoire agréable a lire. Le début est intéressant... vivement la suite.

cant wait to read more

I believe this story is well thought out, written and captivating. Waiting for part 2.

twaddle

I HATE alcohol fueled stories! 1 star

Twice you said defiantly when you meant to say definitely

So far you are doing well. Can't wait for the next installment. Thanks for sharing.

OMG love it

Love Sherri

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Next chapter please.

Two things can inspire taboo thoughts - glimpses of flesh and alcohol. This story masterfully crafts both. Please continue at the same pace.

Great start! Take it further...

Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments. Part Two has been sent in and is currently pending. Should be published in just a couple more days. Part Three is written and almost ready to send in as well.

When can we expect part 2? That was hott af and got me hard af so i need part 2 asap. Lol.

I liked it. I will keep reading.

***Thanks for the read.

Looks very hot.

in my 70 yrs, I have never ever seen a woman get as wet as you mention in the story, sounds like she was pissing herself all the time, and I have been with lots of women lol. sorry, one star.

I gave you 5stars because it sounds like its going to be a very good story. Great for your first.

Going great so far. Starting to read part two now. Good work.

wtf is "dick cheese"?!? get a fucking thesaurus for goodness sake!!

I look forward to reading further for one reason. It sounds like a realistic story and that is for one reason. Quoting you, "I could feel the juices as they began to freely flow from my sloppy wet pussy. This had never happened before and as I curiously looked down between my legs, I saw a couple of small wet spots on the floor and knew they must have dripped from MY DARK CURLY PUBIS." You very obviously know that most moms are hairy down there for several reasons. Most often, those reasons are associated with being a wife, a mom, a housekeeper / homemaker, and most especially if mom is also employed, there isn't time to shave it every day. When the mom story depicts a mom who is clean shaven, it is usually in a setting with a back yard pool or at the ocean where smooth bikini lines are thought necessary? (???) Few mom's, like the one in this story, shave every day in case the opportunity for incest suddenly comes along. You are doing a good job and you got a 5 on this one for a realistic sounding "hairy mom" story. I hope mom and other characters over 40 will "realistically" stay that way ("hairy") in the future stories you write.

You have talent. But you stop way too soon in your stories. Another story that could have been a four or even a five. But this little content it is a three.