All Comments on 'Tom's Parallel World Pt. 09'

by Nellymcboatface

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Awesome update. Really love this story. Looking forward to your next update.

AnythinggoingAnythinggoingalmost 2 years ago

I love your story so far. Keep up the amazing work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Possible king Bob. But most Brits would pronounce Bob while popping the last 'b'

🤫 "clucking bell" 🤫

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story can hardly wait for the next chapter.

ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 2 years ago

Good chapter. I like how you are upping the stakes in your story. Thanks

L0vatL0vatalmost 2 years ago

I am waiting for the Bob's your uncle joke with Becky.

cameraman12035cameraman12035almost 2 years ago

Very good, still have me looking forward to each new chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please don’t forget about this story!!! Love the world you created.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A great story hope your able to continue.

xtrail65xtrail65over 1 year ago

Oh my…seems we have to wait for more….please please please keep this going to a conclusion.

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[12.12.22]

Excellent to this point, looove the Minions reference!

Mas?

11/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"Please Sir, I want some more."

Great job.

montytrampsmontytrampsabout 1 year ago

This is a fantastic series. I love your writing style and hope we can have a continuation.

montytrampsmontytrampsabout 1 year ago

This is a fantastic series. I love your writing style and hope we can have a continuation.

Cor007Cor007about 1 year ago

Thanks for a great story, please continue, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I read this story twice now and find ingaging and down right sexually charging. Keep it up and I hope for you continue story one day.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I don't like cliff hangers.

It has been two years now since chapter 9 was released - when will we be seeing chapter 10????

There are numerous loose ends that need to be tied up.

Your readers are waiting!!!!!

OUTPOST9OUTPOST93 months ago

Wonderful, but i want more, soon, its lika a text drug, cant stop re reading it.

Bosse in sweden.

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