All Comments on 'Tonight Ch. 01'

You did a great job with your description of her initial reaction to the plug. Well-written, and you characters are easy to relate to. Keep it up!

enjoyed very much. only noticed one mis-spelled word. look forward to seeing chapter 2.

Suzanne feel forward slightly > feel should be fell.

who are they? why it takes so long? what and what

Look forward to chapter 2!