by ropebound
i loved it but would like to know if laura had been wearing pantyhose
A promising start but suddenly seemed rather rushed leaving the reader somewhat unfulfilled IMHO...
More background on how her boss has been harbouring secret desiresandfantasies about her, some description of how this night can completely change her life plans etc
Thnx
The story started out great but by the end it seemed like you rushed it a bit too much, It would have been nice to get more details about what happened to her. I wouldn't mind seeing another installment.
A good start to what could be a very good story....lots of possibilities....possibly needs more detail and to be slightly longer to be really powerful...but very arousing! Thank You!