All Comments on 'Tony'

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chris73170chris73170almost 11 years ago
loved it

i loved it but would like to know if laura had been wearing pantyhose

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A bit rushed...

A promising start but suddenly seemed rather rushed leaving the reader somewhat unfulfilled IMHO...

More background on how her boss has been harbouring secret desiresandfantasies about her, some description of how this night can completely change her life plans etc

Thnx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good but too short

The story started out great but by the end it seemed like you rushed it a bit too much, It would have been nice to get more details about what happened to her. I wouldn't mind seeing another installment.

josephstevensjosephstevensalmost 11 years ago
Very promising...

A good start to what could be a very good story....lots of possibilities....possibly needs more detail and to be slightly longer to be really powerful...but very arousing! Thank You!

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