All Comments on 'Too Close for Comfort'

by barabajagal001

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gkrishnagkrishnaover 5 years ago
That was...

disappointing. A great start and buildup, but the ending was way too sudden and unrealistic. And them having so little restraint or second thoughts suddenly removed any empathy you'd have for the characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
And there

It is one more useless cum dump and a loser. Well at least they know neither of them are trust worthy so they belong together so they can disrespect and humiliate each other.

JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
Hmmm.

This is the 2nd story I've read of yours where they had unprotected sex. Good writing, though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
did not realize at first

it is a cheating fucking slut story.

ncng3ncng3about 12 years ago
Very Good

Very nice story. I like the way you write.

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127about 12 years ago

I can't vote either but I thought it was pretty good. Her Bf was stupid for leaving her there in that pressure cooker...lol Oh well a fun time was had by all Mark got his parents and she got the man...lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hot!

For some reason it won't let me vote but here: *****

Yum :)

YDB95YDB95about 12 years ago
Great!

One of the best I've read yet in this genre. Keep up the good work!

xbluespoonxxbluespoonxabout 12 years ago

love the line "stealing her breath" :)

KojoteKojoteabout 12 years ago
Yup.

That was goood!

Very nice buldup and an even better release.

;-D

nixongnixongabout 12 years ago

that cant be the end???!!!! please do continue.

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertabout 12 years ago

Oh please continue!!!!

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