by NSCarter
The pre-mature ejaculation situation between Lilly and Nick (Chapter 1) was Hot. I'd love for you to get back to that theme.
I chanced upon this site and wasn't sure.
I read an awful lot. Most of the great fiction writers but never finish a book that doesn't have me hooked by the 50th page.
You have me hooked in 5?
Very well writen and with a what sems to be an unusual intertwined twist.
I really do hope more of the same on the way and you find a way to complete.
Its rather exciting isn't it.
This and the previous 3 were ridiculously well-done. They are incredibly sexy, well-written, and properly edited (no typos as far as I found). Please keep writing.