All Comments on 'Too Exciting Ch. 04'

This and the previous 3 were ridiculously well-done. They are incredibly sexy, well-written, and properly edited (no typos as far as I found). Please keep writing.

I chanced upon this site and wasn't sure.

I read an awful lot. Most of the great fiction writers but never finish a book that doesn't have me hooked by the 50th page.

You have me hooked in 5?

Very well writen and with a what sems to be an unusual intertwined twist.

I really do hope more of the same on the way and you find a way to complete.

Its rather exciting isn't it.

Who is faith and andrew.

The pre-mature ejaculation situation between Lilly and Nick (Chapter 1) was Hot. I'd love for you to get back to that theme.