All Comments on 'Too Good To Be True Ch. 18'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Great stories. Keep them going.

WargamerWargamer9 months ago

Good stuff, really enjoying this.

5/5

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

What a waste. Brooke could have had it all but threw it away and deformed her body ironically thinking it made her more attractive. Such a damaged individual. I can't help but feel pity for her. Of course she's a terrible person as well, but still, I'm sure if she had had the right friends or people around her - people like Tom - she would have turned out to be a decent person. Oh well.

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