All Comments on 'Toofy Ch. 14'

Honestly have to say I check every day for updates on this story. It's really really good and I'm hooked. Keep up the good work!

Toofy is going to be so pissed. Great story.

Cheers

Another great chapter

This is getting _really_ complicated. wonderful!

Absolutely spectacular story telling. So convoluted! Who is pulling the strings? How can this possibly be resolved? So many intriguing twists. I am enthralled!

Inspired story telling! You portrayed that sudden lurching feeling of impending doom really well when he realised that the unhinged immortal ‘white witch’ was talking about Twentyfour!

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (uk)