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FriskyMindFriskyMindabout 4 years ago
That was just awesome!

Made me laugh like crazy, and what sweet revenge! We should all have a Paula

stroudlestroudleabout 4 years ago
Brilliant turn of events

Great story that shows there is sometimes 2 innocent parties in a betrayal of trust. It's nice to see that Paula includes Kate in on the revenge/lesson teaching, and my what a sexy lesson it was too. You struck the right balance with the bdsm element, it fitted within the story beautifully. Paula is wonderful character

Thank you Smokey another brilliant story from you, one of my favourites of yours

Jc

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
WOW!... Simply Orgasmic,,, Yes!

Hallo Smokey!

When commenting I usually start with "brilliant", but brilliant was already taken!... So orgasmic it has to be... and actually if we're being honest Love, isn't orgasmic really a much better description, of the effect reading one of your hot sexy stories has on women... I couldn't read more than a page before I had 2-fingers in my hot wet (Muschi) _ pussy,,, yes! 😉

Smokey I left my email address in feedback, on chapter 5 of "Beyond Hell and Back"..

Thank-you... 5-Stars and 5-Hot Wet Orgasms!

Gay Kat..

Smokey125Smokey125about 4 years agoAuthor
Gay Kat

Guten tag GK. I'm afraid I have some unfortunate news I've just realized. I didn't see your feedback, as I've not seen any feedback I've been sent for over a year. In February '19 someone hacked my old e-mail address, so I changed it. I tried to update it in Lit, but apparently it needed me to follow instructions in a verification e-mail to change, but I've never received any verification e-mail! So the site's still been going by my old address all this time. :'( But hopefully this will help. If you come back to see, my new e-mail address is gem83star@outlook.com, you can reach me there. I'm so sorry I missed your feedback, this is quite frustrating. I'll be placing a message to the Readers to this effect in my next story. Thank you, cheers.

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Writing lesbian erotica has become one of the most important things in my life. I try to make all my main characters at least reasonably three-dimensional, and balance out the Smokey Sagas between sweet, fluffy, light-hearted pieces with happy endings, and rough, sinister tale...