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All Comments on 'Top Turn On 01: Nudism'

by CanadianErotica

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Slow and repetitive

Characters are so hesitant that it's boring

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great start

I'm loving how the story is starting! And I love that you included some realism in it as well. Truth is, any erotica that doesn't include some form of human nature, such as nervousness, is an unrealistic one. The nervousness of the characters in this story really add to their development and make them seem human, as they are. Looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Share more of the experience

Were you hard when you hugged naked? How did it feel, skin to skin? Please share the experience. What does she look like? Did she seem excited, nervous,...?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
And part 2 is on its way?

Great first story. Looking for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great introduction

looking forward to how this develops.

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I used to have a profile on literotica.. but then I stopped writing for a long time. I'm back, and have started writing stories again which I hope to put here when they're done. Basically, this is going to be a place for all my taboo stories- not all my stories will be taboo,...