All Comments on 'Topfree at a Backyard BBQ'

Have read all your pieces, each uniquely interesting; edgy in an “on edge” sort of way, sometimes just a bit like this piece, sometimes in humorous way like “Regency Estates”, sometimes in a poignant way like “Hobby Horse Night”. You write well and encourage some thought and feeling all while getting a glimpse of the different characters within short space. Bit surprised your pieces do not “score” higher, but that surely/hopefully can’t be troublesome to you. Thanks for continuing to share your wit, insight and imagination.

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Your ideas are interesting, but you execution is uninspired and prosaic.