All Comments on 'Torment Ch. 07'

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This is really an enjoyable chapter and has gone a long way with character development i.e. the progression of the the general mindset. I am looking forward to your ‘October Surprise’ and hopefully you will continue to fill in with other chapters between now and October. This is a wonderful feel good story that is very interesting and is a refreshing change from what is more or less the norm regarding TG/CD/Feminization stories. I am sure that the ‘feel good’ aspect is much of the greater appeal of this story not to mention that it is very well written.

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Veronica

I feel like I was taken for a ride with this one. The story started to go completely off the rails and the names were so bad that they were distracting...and then it made sense and I realized the writer has firm control of the story and how it's going to maintain it's one foot in reality. Great job.