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Anonymousover 10 years ago

I'm just new to this series, but this was great

Please update date soon

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Awwwwww

Sweet! Short chapter though. Can't wait for the next one. Can't we just kill the bad Angel ? Lol

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Lol the Angels totally going to fall for the baby.

Its Jacob from Twilight all over again. Im now going to kill myself for being a man and knowing that.

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Make us whole

TurnitoffturnitoffturnitoffMAKEUSWHOLE

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