All Comments on 'Total Career Wipeout Ch. 01'

Quirky and I liked it.

Really good fun and well written. I was a big fan of Give Up Yet Gameshow story you wrote so this is a real treat.

Brilliant! Just loved it. Can't hardly wait for the next chapter.

try to do the next chapter a little different so that you don't getrepetative and obvious. Maybe allow the lower cameras to show on a cable of special show channel so that you can watch a split screen of all cameras at once. Keep up the good work

I'm very grateful for all the comments on my recent stories. I should point out that, after editor Robertreams fixed the stories for me, I did a second re-write which is why there're still grammatical errors - I am currently going through correcting these.

On the forum, my private message address is switched on if anyone wants to post longer comments/suggestions - it's always great to hear from other fans of the sexy tv show genre because it's such a niche interest!

i'd watch that show!

But it takes too much research for a Yankee. I mean "Norks" and "Bristols"?