All Comments on 'Total Commitment'

Bye bye!

Abuse

Fuck femdom

This author certainly knows how to maintain suspense.She (or is that just wishful thinking) presents a perfectly happy if naive slave but we,the readers,have a feeling the he will not always be happy.

GREAT STORY!!!

It's different then some of the common femdom stuff! Creative and well written.

KEEP IT GOING!

Wonderful story! What a fantastic woman!

Ugh!

At least, no face slapping like the other story. Face slapping always damages the hearing in a while. He won’t be able to run, now, his junk, throwing around, will soon be too painful

How interesting that she did not control his sex.

This NEEDS a sequel.

FUCK that was amazing!!

Part of me wants a sequel to this but part of me thinks this is the perfect ending.

In either case, I would LOOVE to see more stories like this one. Bravo!

Now following the author, favourited and of course 5 stars! Good luck and thank you.

Seems kind of elaborate when, otherwise than bankrupting the guy she doesntbreslly gain any real control. For instance, government backed student loans for some reason can't be cleared in bankruptcy. But at 30 percent these aren't. So other than making her guilty of making a fraudulent loan what do they accomplish? I know the author is trying to turn the screw but for me it doesn't get there.