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Anonymousover 4 years agoBeyond just good start
Only time this idea is done, it's a bloody kid and it has sub story with a focus on sex, or revenging bullies. Though some things did tip things off here and there but I feel you wanted this with the Ex's. Best was how you played how to described how everything happened at the scene, having it actually drawn out like a movie or real life!
tim0277over 4 years agoGreat story
I truly enjoyed reading this and can not wait till the next chapter
Anonymousover 4 years agoGreat writing
Really enjoy the story. Especially your writing style seems very unique to me. Great work, can't wait for more!
TSreaderover 4 years agoWow!
A fantastic start to this story! I can't wait to read more of it! Thank you!
Anonymousover 4 years agoMore, more and even some more...
You need to post a part II as soon as possible!
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Podimore@PodimoreOk, a few words from me. I write stories I want to read and they develop in the way I want them to develop. If you enjoy them, great. If not, then there are plenty more out there. I do not accept anonymous comments and if you want to edit the story - get in touch. The developi...
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