All Comments on 'Touched by the Moon Pt. 08'

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mac1729mac1729over 1 year ago

Another great chapter to your story!

Thanks for writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Stellar writing. Interesting story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love it! Want more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a good story! Would be great to publish as a paranormal fantasy book. Looking forward to reading more chapters!

MrSmith27MrSmith27about 1 year ago

A very impressive tale. I am looking forward to the next installment.

Amber_RosesAmber_Roses11 months ago

I need to know what happens next. This is so well written

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I must admit, this story was very absorbing, acrimonious, and shocking at some points. (She masturbating to her father's image, and the group sex scenes were a little too much for my taste).

But, Overall it was written very well. The characters were intersting. I liked Sam's father particularly. The chemistry between Sam and Wren was perfect. An Alpha female and a submissive male make a perfect couple :) Great story. Thank you.

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RBWriter is the handle of a published author who’d like to share some of the wilder, darker stories in her imagination. She no longer posts stories to Literotica, but you can find more of her work at books2read.com/rowanbetencourterotica Thanks!

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