All Comments on 'Towards the Summer Solstice Ch. 01'

Nice story, looking forward to more.

I really like these types of stories, is she or is she not that is the question I hope you do write a part 2 and 3 to this story

Very good story and nicely written. Look forward to reading the syllabus for the Midnight Class. Your ending to this chapter will ha e me coming back.

An intriguing tale and I'll be interested to see how it proceeds. I did pick up one small apparent mistake at the start of the story. You write: Kara "...had never had sex with a man..." And yet three paragraphs on, Nina often "...helped Kara to seduce guys..." I know 'seduce' is a flexible word with shades of meaning but in the context as written it suggests inducing to have sex.

I'm wasn't sure what the 'p.s.' was all about. It seemed to repeat as if editing had gone wrong . However the pool and following sex was very well done.

Loved the ending hope you do more similar to this one