All Comments on 'Townhall'

Good luck!

5

Good premise.

But sex is MUCH too fast. Starting. Continuing. Finishing.

All that setup about her breasts and nipples, and then nothing with them?

Nothing with her ass?

No description of her pussy? (And VAGINA is internal, not external.

An editor/proofreader would help. You wrote "...vice-like..." but you meant VISE not VICE.

Three stars.

Good start!

I like this story and the two main characters. Let's see where this goes. More please.

Like the sexual build up, tension, and release.