All Comments on 'Toxic MILF Ch. 02'

This mother-daughter team is a godsend of sensuality and eroticism!

Their story is beautifully written with plenty of sexual tension across these two chapters!

Thank you for making me intensely hard with a powerful release....I look forward to seeing them train him to a fully submissive role....

The story is interesting, but the writing is appalling. The grammatical errors make me wonder what the writer's first language is. Painful to read such a mess of sloppy construction and confusing misapplication of tenses. The tone is sexy but the brutally bad writing spoils it.