All Comments on 'Toxic MILF Ch. 02'

The story is interesting, but the writing is appalling. The grammatical errors make me wonder what the writer's first language is. Painful to read such a mess of sloppy construction and confusing misapplication of tenses. The tone is sexy but the brutally bad writing spoils it.

This mother-daughter team is a godsend of sensuality and eroticism!

Their story is beautifully written with plenty of sexual tension across these two chapters!

Thank you for making me intensely hard with a powerful release....I look forward to seeing them train him to a fully submissive role....