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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

generally, well done. one wonders what it would have been like if mandy or one of the grils used the strap on on roxannes rear, perhaps at the end, perhaps that would have been too screwy with the hierarchy or supposed rules though

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great job. Not enough stories with Roxanne. Hopefully you do more with her topping and especially bottoming.

litcalurker1litcalurker1about 1 year ago

This was excellent. The first page especially, matched up so well with the Roxanne that's presented on-screen, and the ensuing temptation by Mandy was thrilling. I saw a great balance here between her youthfulness, and virtually ANY Womens Champion's wanting to... 'celebrate' after winning a title.. (Because really, how could any human look at Gigi's ass for one second and resist?)

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I'm still very much an amateur writer, but I'd like to think I get a little better with each story I write. I mostly write about wrestling fantasy, since I have a soft spot for the graps. For inquiries about a commission, email me here: darkdoctrines112@gmail.com Note: If s...

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