All Comments on 'Tracey's Slave Shop Pt. 01'

by Dirty_Old_Pervert

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great start hope you continue and the chapters get longer. I love your theme I have read as many Tracey stories as I can find from various authors this one looks interesting and has a lot of potential. Good luck with the series.

mul717ud35mul717ud35almost 2 years ago

I hope there will be many chapters of this wonderful story.

SoulcatchSoulcatchalmost 2 years ago

Love the story so far. But even more important I need to thank you for pointing me to Kate Smith. I have been looking for Tracy's collar story forever. Read it years ago and forgot where I saw it.

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsalmost 2 years ago

Titalin... Give me a six-pack of those baby's....

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can tell this was made by a man “Like any woman, I have a bit of a submissive streak myself” nope bud just your wishful sexist thinking <3

roseyfingersroseyfingersover 1 year ago

Well written and funny although the factual set up is pretty silly. That probably helps.

roseyfingersroseyfingersover 1 year ago

And no, women don't all have a submissive streak.

Dirty_Old_PervertDirty_Old_Pervertover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for your comments.

Of course, in the real world, not all women are submissive. As for the imaginary dystopia in which this story takes place, it has not been established whether all women are submissive there either. Bear in mind that this story is being told in the first person, so we only see this world from Tracey’s point of view. She may BELIEVE that all women have at least a latent submissive streak, but that is more a statement about Tracey's mindset than than those other women. Tracey is doing the sorts of mental gymnastics that people do when they need to justify their own despicable behavior to themselves.

It is definitely established in this story that Tracey is submissive, but one message I hope this story conveyed, which is as true in the real world as it is here, is that just because someone may be submissive in the bedroom that doesn't mean they are doormats in other parts of their lives. Tracey is both submissive and a bad ass -- the two are not mutually exclusive.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wishful thinking? Nah, not with all that devotion to protesting a fictional story and attempting to show your non existent savvy. lol Born pets it looks like. :D

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