All Comments on 'Tracking Evil, a Podcast Pt. 13a'

Excellent story with a young character who combines youthful ignorance with a pure instinct for sexual adventures.

Sonda gets back in the game with new partner Denisa after mourning the death of Destry. Some things you tell don't tell daddy dearest. We know all Denisa we'll never Hehe! She's basically the Russian version of Erica with a criminal father.

Arlene goes to Zekes Judge friend Abraham and finds her case has too many holes, including won't survive court scrutiny and not make it to trial either on speculation theories but Abraham gives his marching orders to Arlene (since Arlene is a submissive girl to Black Dom's) getting Arlene to accept her true self."

Next, we'll how Erica doing on her side of the investigation on Side B on her getting back to basics against Butterman.

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The Romanian merc was hot. Nasty, smart and hot. More please

I was skeptical about new characters but that was a hot chapter with Denisa!

Hi Firsttimewriting. I love your stories. What happened to part 13b? Was something wrong with it?

@Carlick, Hi and thanks for reading my stuff. I uploaded an incomplete file of 13b, missing a few thousand words. I asked the site administrator to take it down so that I could get the complete file uploaded. That's now been submitted so fingers crossed it will be online soon to read. Apologies for any confusion caused.

I can't help but think that the 2 tough girls getting gangbanged by the criminals they're having dealings with lowers their standing in their eyes somewhat, especially Denisa. But whatever, the fucking must occur. Denisa's first time with a black man was 3 at the same time using all her holes. What a way to break forward into new territory!

I know it's been becoming more obvious through the story (especially in the last few chapters) of Arlene's newfound desire for dominant black men, but it feels like the first time she's admitted it to herself. And out loud at that. And yet the disparity between "As a grandfather/father who's been upholding the law, you have my blessing to kill those sons of bitches." to immediately "So how about that fucking?" was too much for me, lmao. These old men are fucking themselves into their graves, and I'm sure they'd die happy.