by Firsttimewriting
A very promising beginning to a story, with strong elements of sex, action and stripped-down human behaviour.
This turned me on so much, I loved it, and can’t wait for the next part! I’m sorry to read that you are burned out, but I’m not surprised after you’ve been so prolific and put out so much quality, hot writing. I hope you can take the time to recharge and find your muse again, I’ve loved reading all of your stories. <3
Awesome chapter.
Looking forward to Denisa adventures i and the rest of her female squad at the meantime,
Continue on
Cheers!
@Hagis - Thanks again for your comments, I know you've been reading and commenting on my work for a few years now and I've always appreciated your feedback
@MissEmmaS really glad the story came across well for you. Thanks for your thoughts on my taking a break, as you say, it's hopefully a temporary case of being burnt out.
@Anonymous- I recognise your sign off style, I think you've commented on every Tracking Evil story I have written, love the dedication!
As usual, @Firsttimewriting provides a wonderfully rich story and plotline for us to enjoy. This story sets the stage for others to come and is well worth a read.