All Comments on 'Trading Control for Love Pt. 02'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

Wonderful conclusion!

5

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc3 months ago

Good series! Well written with steady rhythm to the plot development across both chapters. My only concern inflict was she was never able to fully put being a Rothman aside, making him seem like a boy toy as much as a true lover. Totally believable as told but definitely a relationship I’d want any part of. 4.7*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Since i have known people of different economic or social status, I think your story is accurate and very well written. 5.

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