by WantingToWriteGood
Good series! Well written with steady rhythm to the plot development across both chapters. My only concern inflict was she was never able to fully put being a Rothman aside, making him seem like a boy toy as much as a true lover. Totally believable as told but definitely a relationship I’d want any part of. 4.7*
Since i have known people of different economic or social status, I think your story is accurate and very well written. 5.