All Comments on 'Trading Control for Love Pt. 02'

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f86supersaber 8 days ago

A different type of story, I liked it very much! A slow burn, and a happy ending Nicely done!

Anonymous2 months ago

Since i have known people of different economic or social status, I think your story is accurate and very well written. 5.

Demosthenes384bc 4 months ago

Good series! Well written with steady rhythm to the plot development across both chapters. My only concern inflict was she was never able to fully put being a Rothman aside, making him seem like a boy toy as much as a true lover. Totally believable as told but definitely a relationship I’d want any part of. 4.7*

Boyd Percy 4 months ago

Wonderful conclusion!

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Pushing 70 and proud of it. Hoping to retire in 5 years or so. Trying to write stories which entertain, arouse, and provoke thought or insight for the reader.

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