All Comments on 'Traffic Fine'

twist at the end.

what an ending that was phenominal

Nice twist and the end, didn't see it 'coming'.

My son is an officer and I shared the story with him. I wonder if they will be here for the holidays?

Very enjoyable indeed! Keep writing them. I shared this with my wife and though our role-play isn't quite as rough she really enjoyed it too.

Again well done.

oh that ending was ten million different kinds of fucking brilliant. i absolutely loved it.

I was not expecting the twist, and it was a stroke of genius. Very different from a lot of other stories.

i love rough men in uniforms. lol. great ending! please keep them coming. :D

YES!

excellent twist- made me happy :)