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Click here"I wonder what the rest of the night will bring," Rita said as we reached the French doors.
"It's just past one o'clock," Jess noted. "There's a lot of party left!"
"I'm sure we'll find some trouble to get into," I added playfully.
As we stepped out onto the patio, I had no idea just how true that statement would prove to be.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoSome people complain about the kids, but honest I understand the writer not mentioning them much, besides they are just born and therefore boring. What I find more difficult to understand throughout this whole story chain none of the characters ever meet their parents, brother or sisters. Also John has apparently no male friends or best friend at least not male besides his business associate Jason.
"I never say this, but I seriously could use a cigarette after that," Jess said, sniffling. That line should be cut or edited, in the Houston Hooker House it's mentioned several times.
LiveLocalLateBreakingover 1 year agoAuthorIt's a point very well-taken regarding the kids. I address it more in the note to Ch. 5, which comes tomorrow. And I think we'll have more distance from the "family" aspect of the book. The fundamental idea to me is that what we'll see now in this book is more snippets in time, further spaced out, than previously, and the assumption is that it's a boring, normal existence for them in those periods we don't see them on-screen. I also envision that Book 5 here quite possibly will be the wind-down of John, Kat, Jess, and Rita as the focal point of every chapter. I have a lot more planned in this universe, but in some ways this is kind of the final setup for them. But I can always change my mind! These feedback is invaluable and much appreciated.
Bigboat987over 1 year agoKat and Rita having some fun again would be great imo, im liking this direction.
Anonymousover 1 year agoExcellent chapter! The best way for Rita and Kat to get back into the swing of things might be for the four-some to go to New York, France, Italy, or an island resort where they can meet people they will never see again, and party to their heart’s content, screwing all cocks and eating all the pussy they want.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI read the note, and since it's your story, I bow to your greater wisdom. However, I stand by my premise that the kids are a big downer. If you can remove them in a positive way, the slut-fest will continue. But, I cannot help feeling that the birth will be hard to overcome.
