All Comments on 'Traffic Girl - Rita Ch. 23'

Great plan for next 3 chapters for 1 on 1 time. The romance at the core of all debauchery makes this series so enjoyable.

Love this little sections of the one on ones and time together to know the main players just a little better. Fun storytelling. And we usually have some hot nasty sexual adventures explode on to the scenes right after this as well. Now that is always a lot of sexual excitement. Just good entertainment. Crystal is coming into her own and always there are fun little hints of things to come. 5 Stars. Cheers and keep up this great story.

Refreshing new chapter, good writing! The love between Kat, Rita and John is absolutely genuine, I can't say the same about Jess at all. She is a wild child who will never be emotionally available, grow up and be truly committed. I wouldn't be surprised if her actions eventually leads to the total destruction of this unusual family.

Very nice dialogue, but Kat shouldn't make promises she can't keep! There's no way in hell she will ever fulfill herself proclaimed vow and the author should know better, it makes the story highly irritating.