by RetrospectiveInsomnia
Holy shit. At what point, in your writing, did you come the realization that you actually dont have a fucking clue about sex?
Well, nothing to read, or see, here. Keep going. Combining the chapters would get you a few good chapters worth reading. I was disappointed in not reading about Anna's time in the training room where she was broken. How was that really done. Four days is a long time with non-stop torture and denial, especially when there are no descriptions of what happened. The story goes that she was broken after four days but not how, what, when, where, etc being explained. Too sterile. Was she even given any food or water during that time? No wonder a body is broken. At least she was given a couple of days of sleep. Did they drug her?