All Comments on 'Trained'

by Ebenezer1

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Bite the first cock that enters your mouth

End of stupid story. It always makes me laugh when an author assumes someone won't or can't bite a man's dick off. The human jaw develops over 2000 lbs of pressure. More than enough to remove a dick. The rest is a joke.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Me PLEASE

I would love this 717-451-7783 I wouldn't ever bite a dick off just get it off as best as I can and take it in my ass also text me anytime!!!!!!! For real

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What?

First of all the story wain't well formed. I don't know much about any of the characters and the mans submission was absolutely unrealistic, there was nothing offered to him and no blackmail that would cause a guy to do what he supposedly did . There were no sex scenes to make up for the lack of a good plot line. Like what erotic story doesn't have an erotic scene. I think you tried to make the people unattractive to add to the submissive story but hobestly it just ended up sounds gross.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

need more to follow

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