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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Didn't finish Page 1; good, but horrible quality. Counted over 20 definite mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

She's a nude woman, not a naked women.

Women are selcome naked, they are nude. Guys are naked. Someday, you'll learn the intricacies of writing.

Minus two for the rest of it.

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I write for my pleasure, it's not perfect and I don't pretend to be a great writer. My writing is fantasy, it makes me horny and I hope it does the same for my readers.