by R_U_Romantic
irgendwie heiß, aber auch irgendwie verwirrend ... von "es sollte romantisch sein und nicht ein "wham bam thank you mam first time incest" zu "cool interracial gangbang and incest". ok Womans Mind und sutch ... aber trotzdem
It is undeniable that this is a very well-written story. For this reviewer, however, it would have even better if the incestuous element was absent.
You’ve written enough stories to know not to surprise your incest readers with interracial with not a prefaced warning of any kind.
Good story. Nicely written and I liked the plot twists a lot. Helped the story NOT follow the standard, cookie cutter plot lines of other stories on here. Look forward to a sequel. So many paths you can follow.
Son called her "Mommy " & its remind her that her son she is going to fuck gives hot to the story. But such a thing keeps only between them. Should not know others. It gives hot too & sex with son & almost going to caught to her daughter & she doesn't have time to get dressed properly & going / chatting with her daughter while her sons seed inside her & she think about how dirty & wrong to do it kind of seen good in these kinds of stories.
kinda hot, but also kinda confusing ... from "it should be romantic and not a "wham bam thank you mam first time incest" to "cool interracial gangbang and incest". ok Womans Mind and sutch ... but still.
Sorry :)