All Comments on 'Training My Dream Man Pt. 02'

Loved it. Looking forward to more installments.

I love this, especially when she strips him and play with his butt.

This story has a lot of great elements, but you might want to do a little more research about how a clitoris responds to stimulation. A clitoris has a hood, not lips. One cannot insert anything into a clitoris. It's not an orifice that can loosen or tighten around an object.

I really am enjoying this so far, but details like these are taking me a bit out of the story. Keep up the great work and keep learning!

Aside from the anatomical things already mentioned the short, choppy sentences drove me bonkers.

Good story line otherwise.

Martha's gradual buildup of psychological domination of Kevin, and the climax it reaches at the beach is quite sexy. I think you spoiled the story a bit with the sexual assault on the Asian lady.

It was amazing story and I believe few of criticisms have already been mentioned, one being misuse of word 'clitoris' and second being unnecessary and sudden inclusion of sexual encounter with asian young woman. Else it was a really good slow paced dominance though it could have been even better if it had few more chs like how she message trained him etc.

Thanks for a wonderful story