by JohnMurray4173
Hot, funny, and even plausible. Except for the part where flu shots dont contain nanobots. That was just silly. Of course they contain nanobots.
Jedd
Very funny! Pity it isn't true - I would be on the first flight from Christchurch to Brisbane if it was - I can think of a couple of likely candidates I'd love to try it on! I guess we'll have to wait for nanotechnology to advance a bit further!
This was a fun story to read. Both the girls turned out as expected. And your protagonist didn't go overboard like so many others do. Changed the two bitches to become nice women and is living with the results. Such a fine human being. 5 stars well deserved
Great fun, I enjoyed this immensely.
Wouldn't it be terrific to have this level of control!