by simplysizzling
that i ran across this story in the new search, if it were up to me i would give this a 10plus due to the nature of the excellent skill as a writer to bring off the mind control, the dom, and sub and the as i can see this going into her complete submission and finding her true self, possibly since i live the lifestyle myself as submissive i can feel her mixed emotions and can see how well he plays her...will she commit fully? release all control? become the power exec by day and the full time slut she now she is by night? i hope to see this in more chapters and see how this plays out. Thank you for such a wonderfully written story. excellent work. repectfully a fan in Texas
the same things over and over, lets hope the next chapter is better
I am enjoying every moment of this story and look forward to more