All Comments on 'Training the Trophy Pt. 02'

Love the concept and your description is vivid, but without some sex for me to enjoy, well… I’m here for sexy details. Without sex, the story lacked the specialness I’m looking for on this site.

Thank you so much.

While this has been up for a bit, I just found your story. While lacking in sexual detail, it has the possibility of being a nice series. But, it needs ruin. She must demonstrate her willingness to follow the sexual terms of the arrangement, and she must be able to debase herself along with being a proper public trophy. 3 stars or the setup.

I gave two stars because you never finished what you started, once again. Is this habit of yours because of attention deficit syndrome? If so, putting your energy into finishing all that you've left incomplete would be a significant step toward your own beneficial advancement.

That's it? What gives? You have the excellent makings of a very good story. Please finish. The sexual possibilities are endless!

About as polished as a "how to" guide for setting the clock on your grandparent's VCR. The conversations are pivotal, but presented haphazardly, like this happened and this was said (emotionless and clinically boring)

HIU

Smokepole