All Comments on 'Trainwrecked Ch. 01'

by AndieShay

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MaonaighMaonaighabout 2 years ago

Nicely written with a promising theme. But the sudden ending seemed abrupt and rushed. Can I take it there is more to come?

AliceGeeAliceGeeabout 2 years ago

I am assuming that this is the first installment, if so it is a very promising beginning.

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

Loved this first post: Erotic, fun, sassy with a lot of entertainment potential. Shay is an intriguing character as is the storyline. Your title “Trainwrecked” is also intriguing — suggests more with complications (?). By way, the authors you currently follow on this site reveal excellent tastes. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 years ago

Not sure that it is necessary, but any chance your two nameless characters get together again; after all, an intensely erotic start if they do. Like it a lot — the anonymity, the pace, the sex, and just enough background to provide some context. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

DanDraperDanDraperabout 2 years ago

That was amazing. Looks like she finally got an FWB to her liking, but if this goes on to another chapter I hope there will be more between them.

AndieShayAndieShayabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for the positive words. Yes there is more to come. And I will post as I finish chapters so keep an eye out.

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My name is Andy, I have a lot of experience in poetry and short stories so I am trying my hand at something a little different. Thank yall so much for the positive words on Trainwrecked Yes there is more to come! To all of the readers that have messaged and commented about a...

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