All Comments on 'Trans Bikers'

Not bad. Could use some more descriptive scenes to really revel in the moments.

Also, for future reference: a paragraph is typically 2 to 5 sentences and would make this just that much easier to read.

Great outline for a story, but where's the "meat" of it. We want to experience it, not hear about it.

Keep it up, it's a great start, but don't go so fast, next time. What is the character thinking and feeling, in depth.

Hot and quick.

Great jerk off story for lunch break. But I would love to have it be longer, so I could have a slow wank to it. Edge myself in bed for a while, before cumming.