by Minervham113
OH GREAT WRITER OF FICTION! I command you to finish this story? Ha Ha But if you can it would be great? Fantastic story! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
Great story line please finish this fantastic story. It brought me in and captured my attention .
This was a good start, especially for a new writer. Too bad it was abandoned.
You had hell of a story going and you don’t even bother to finish it. 1 star.
I really liked the story even though the chapters were a little short, but I wished i never read this. It'll be bothering me for while that a good story like this only made it 3 chapters.